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The moment you've all been waiting for. Here is my Season 3 written episode United Glee Clubs.

Scene 1:

Figgins is in the choir room with ND.

Figgins: Guys, settle down, I have some important news.

ND is quiet.

Figgins: You guys have been chosen as one of the glee clubs to perform at the Dallas Busch Gardens.

ND Cheers

Finn: Who are the other choirs

Figgins: They are VA, AI, the Warblers, and the Meadowlarks.

Mercedes: We're familiar with all the choirs except for the last one. Where are the Meadowlarks from.

Figgins: The Meadowlarks are the glee club of Crawford County Day School. They are an all-girls school.

Blaine: Crawford School is the sister school to Dalton. When I was in the Warblers, we performed for them.

Kurt: Oh yea, the two of us led in Animal

Figgins: It's quite the honor for you all to perform there. Busch Gardens TX is one of the best amusement parks, and they just opened a new roller coaster.

Sam: What roller coaster?

Figgins: Mr. Evans, I don't know. You'll just have to see when you get there.

Rory: Nice, I heard the US has the best roller coasters, so

Rachel: (Ignoring Figgins, standing up) Guys, I have just the song for us to sing there.

Figgins: Ms. Berry, VA decides on the song since they placed second in nationals last year. That's just the way it is.

Rachel sits down looking disappointed as well as the other glee club members.

Figgins: Congrats on the honor, glee club dismissed

Figgins: Mr. Hudson, Mr. Puckerman, stay here, I need to speak to you both.

The other members leave as Finn, Puck, Will, and Figgins stay in the choir room.

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Before, I start with part two of scene one, I'm going to list the cast members for this episode like they would do with episode on TV.

Here are the names you would see on the screen in that order.

Dianna Agron

Chris Colfer

Darren Criss

Jane Lynch

Jayma Mays

Kevin Mchale

Lea Michele

Cory Monteith

Heather Morris

Matthew Morrison

Mike O'Malley

Amber Riley

Naya Rivera

Mark Salling

Harry Shum Jr

Jenna Ushkowitz

Special Guest Stars:
Idina Menzal

and
Taylor Lautner

Guest Starring:
Mike O'Malley

Iqbal Theba

Dot Marie Jones

Romy Rosemont

Chord Overstreet
Damian McGinty

Max Adler
Matheus Fernandes

Gina Hecht
The actor and actress playing Tina's parents.

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good so far, continue smile.gif

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QUOTE (tinalover @ Jun 26 2011, 03:16 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Before, I start with part two of scene one, I'm going to list the cast members for this episode like they would do with episode on TV.

Here are the names you would see on the screen in that order.

Dianna Agron

Chris Colfer

Jane Lynch

Jayma Mays

Kevin Mchale

Lea Michele

Cory Monteith

Heather Morris

Matthew Morrison

Mike O'Malley

Amber Riley

Naya Rivera

Mark Salling

Harry Shum Jr

Jenna Ushkowitz

Special Guest Stars:
Idina Menzal

Matheus Fernandes

Actress playing the manager at Busch Gardens Dallas. (She will get to sing which is why she's put in the Special Guest Stars section.)

Guest Starring:
Iqbal Theba

Dot Marie Jones

Charice

Romy Rosemont

Chord Overstreet
Ashley Fink

Darren Criss
Max Adler

Gina Hecht
The actor and actress playing Tina's parents.


Seeing that Matheus is the most hated out of all the Glee Project contestants, I would like to explain that I'm having him play this role because that particular character, Joao, is from Brazil and is short, so it makes total sense for Matheus to play him. It's a huge coincidence that Matheus is from Brazil and is short.

Also, just to let you all know, yes, Busch Gardens Dallas does not exist, but Glee is fictional. Busch Gardens Dallas will be an Asian themed park much like how BG Williamsburg is European themed and BG Tampa is African themed.

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Scene 1, part 2

The choir room consists of now just, Finn, Puck, Will, and Figgins

Figgins: Mr. Hudson, Mr. Puckerman, on behalf of your records, the two of you are not permitted to perform with the rest of the glee club.

Finn: Wait, what did we even do.

Figgins: You guys slashed the tires of cars VA won, twice!

Puck: TWICE! We only did it once, and that was two years ago!

Figgins: All I know is that the past two years when VA won sectionals, they all got cars, Range Rovers two years ago, and Porsche Cayennes last year, and both times the tires got slashed by two people.

Will: The Range Rovers, yes, it was Puck and Finn, but the Cayennes, it must of been some other people. It seems to be a huge coincidence that the tires on the Cayennes got slashed as well.

Figgins: It doesn't matter who slashed the tires on the Cayennes, but those students slashed the Range Rover tires which is a major felony. Therefore, they are not permitted to perform. I was kind enough to listen to Ms. Corcoran when she said no to expulsion, because otherwise, they would of been expelled. You were there for all this, William.

Will: Yes I was. But, you know they got jobs at Sheets and Things to pay for debt.

Finn: We've paid the debt a while ago and bought new tires for them.

Figgins: It doesn't matter if you two paid the debt, you guys did a major crime against one of teams that's performing with you guys at Busch Gardens, and for that, you two are not permitted to go, and that's final. You two are hereby dismissed.

Finn and Puck leave on the verge of tears. Will becomes furious.

Will: You can't do this. Not allow two of my members to go on the trip because of something they did TWO YEARS AGO! This is a huge honor for them.

Figgins: William, my hands are tied, slashing tires is a major felony, and....

Will: Look, you're only punishing them because they didn't get expelled for this. Ms. Corcoran didn't want them expelled. Look, if Ms. Corcoran finds out that you're doing this, she will be pretty upset.

Figgins: William, Mr. Goolsby is now the VA coach.

Will: Yes, I know that, but...

Figgins: The bottom line is that Mr. Hudson and Mr. Puckerman are not permitted on the trip, and nothing is going to change that.

End of Scene 1

Don't worry, this is not a clone of my "Acura" story. There will be other plots that are not related to the tire slashing at all.

There will be a few things similar to my "Acura" story though, but not many.

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Poor Finn and Puck I hope they get out of this! This is an interesting concept behind this story. I sense it's going to be good.

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Sorry for the delay.

Here's scene 2:

Tina, Mercedes, Mike, and Sam are at Breadstyx.

Tina: I can't believe we're performing at the Dallas Busch Gardens.

Sam: Busch Gardens Dallas is one of the best amusement parks ever. It has... (Sam lists names of fictional roller coasters)

Mike: Woah, they all sound like fun.

Mercedes: I wonder what VA is going to pick?

Tina: Well, as we know VA, likes to do epic songs, so I'm sure it will be an epic song.

Sam, Mike, and Mercedes all nod.

Tina gets a text message, she reads it.

Tina: Oh no, I gotta go, this is a family emergency.

She runs out.

Mike: Tina, Tin....

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Scene 3:

Brittany and Santana are at the Lima Bean

Brittany: It's so nice how you finally came out about being a lesbian.

Santana: I know, it was worth it so I could be with you.

Brittany: It's like a giraffe getting together with a dolphin.

Karofsky walks up to them.

Karofsky: Hey

Santana: Hey Karofsky, nice to see you here, you know, it would be easier if you could just reveal that you're gay. I did that.

Karofsky: I'm not gay, how many times do I have to tell you that.

Santana: Look, I know for a fact that you don't want to reveal you're gay, but don't worry, I'll protect you if you get bullied.

Karofsky: Quit accusing me of being gay, I am not gay.

Karofsky leaves

Santana: How am I going to get Karofsky to realize his sexuality.

Brittany: Have him talk to a giraffe.

Santana: This is going to be hard.

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Scene 4:

Everyone is at the Glee Club meeting, except Puck and Finn. Will walks in.

Will: Hey guys, where's Finn and Puck?

Kurt: Finn is too miserable to come, and I assume Puck is not here for the same reason. Apparently, Figgins banned them both from performing at Busch Gardens, only because of the fact that they slashed Vocal Adrenaline's tires TWO YEARS AGO.

Everyone gasps in shock.

Kurt: Yea, me and Blaine tried everything to get Finn to cheer up, but he is too upset, and Puck's mom called saying that Puck is having a huge meltdown.

Mercedes: You're kidding!

Mike: That was two years back.

Santana: Figgins can't do that.

Sam: I wasn't even at McKinley when they did this.

Will: Guys, guys, look, I know about this, and I tried to tell Figgins, but he wouldn't listen.

Rory: I just came to McKinley this year, I find it very riduculous. I think we should all talk to him.

Rachel: You're right, guys, we are all going down to Figgins office to protest.

Everyone else (except Tina): Yea

Tina doesn't look too happy.

Will: Guys, that's not a good idea. Look, let's start our practice. Tina, is there something wrong?

Tina: Don't want to talk about it.

Will: Want to talk to Ms. Pillsbury?

Tina: No, it's personal.

Mike: Yea, Mr. Shue, the other day when we were at Breadstyx, Tina left because of an emergency.

Will: Ok, Tina, try and focus.

Tina: I'll try.

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Sorry for the wait, but here's scene 5

Everyone in the glee club is in Figgin's office except for Puck, Finn, and Tina.

Rachel: How can you do this?

Mercedes: Puck and Finn are part of our club.

Kurt: You can't just ban them from going just for something they did two years ago.

Blaine: Yea, I wasn't even he..

Figgins: Mr. Anderson, what they did was really serious and...

Kurt: But THEY GOT JOBS TO PAY THEM BACK!!!

Figgins: Yes, but slashing tires is a felony, you all should be thankful, they're still here at McKinney?

Sam: Yea, but it doesn't make sense how they would get punished for something before I came to this school.

Santana: This isn't fair, and we all in the glee club think that.

Santana looks around and finds that Tina isn't with them

Santana: Wait, where's Tina, I thought we're all protesting together.

Figgins: Look, I don't care if Ms. Cohen-Chang is here or not. These guys are not going to Busch Gardens and that's final!!

Everyone hopelessly leaves.

Scene 6:

Brittany and Santana are in the hallway.

Santana: OMG, I can't believe Figgins would do this, how on earth is he the principal?

Brittany: Yea

Santana: I don't know what there is to do. Wait, Ms. Corcoran's a teacher here now, maybe we should go to her.

Brittany: I don't think that's a good idea. She could agree.

Santana: You're right.

Santana sighs. Karofsky then approaches them.

Karofsky: Hey ladies, what's wrong.

Santana: Principal Figgins isn't allowing Puck and Finn on our trip, because of something they did two years ago.

Karofsky: What was that?

Brittany: You don't want to know.

Karofsky: Well, I'm going to go give Figgins a piece of his mind.

Karofsky runs towards Figgins office. Brittany and Santana run after him.

Santana: Karofsky, stop, you'll get in trouble.

She and Brittany grab Karofsky at the office door.

Santana: You already got in enough trouble when you bullied Kurt, you could get expelled.

Karofsky sighs

Karofsky: You're right.

Santana: Look, it would just be easier to reveal that you're gay.

Karofsky: I'M NOT GAY!! When are you two going to get a clue?

Brittany: Look, we know you're gay, giraffes don't lie.

Karofsky: Look, I'm straight, S-T-R-A-I-G-H-T, straight. I can't believe you girls keep accusing me of being gay.

Karofsky walks off.

Brittany: What do we do now.

Santana: There's got to be a way to make him realize.

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Here's a spoiler. Sue, Emma, Beiste, Shelby, Blaine, Burt, and Carole will all appear later on. Also, new characters I promised you like Joao (played by Matheous from TGP), and Tina's parents will appear.

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Scene 7:

Mike, Tina, and Mercedes are at Lima Bean.

Mike: Where were you?

Mercedes: We didn't see you in Figgins' office.

Tina: Look guys, I am against this as much as you guys are, I agree that Figgins is being unfair, it's just that I needed to go home, there's this huge family problem.

Mercedes: What happened.

Tina (Crying): You don't want to know.

Mike: Tina, I'm your boyfriend, I gotta know.

Tina: It's my cousin.

Mercedes: What about your cousin

Tina: He's charged, for murdering somebody.

Mercedes: Oh my.

Mike: What's his sentence?

Tina: We don't know, his trial is coming up, all we know is that he pled guilty.

Mercedes: Who did he murder?

Tina: Somebody from his school, because he was gay.

Mercedes and Mike become silent.

Tina: This is my one cousin I love the most, and I never thought he would be homophobic, even worse than Karofsky was. I gotta go.

Tina runs out crying.

Mercedes: Poor Tina, I can't believe her favorite cousin would let her down.

Mike: There's gotta be something to cheer her up.

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Ok seems good so far, Can't wait for the other parts to be up tongue.gif altought I feel like Karofsky character is a little different from his own self, but maybe is just me, continue the good work!

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The plot thickens...

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Feel so bad for Tina! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Sorry for the delay, but scene 8 is here.

ND (except Puck and Finn) is in the choir room with Will and Shelby. ND looks confused.

Will: Guys, I'm going to be out for a few weeks, there's been a family emergency.

Mercedes: What happened?

Will: My mom got really sick with cancer, it's unknown if she'll survive or not. Anyhow, I'm not able to join you all on the Busch Gardens trip. Ms. Corcoran is here to take over for the glee club, and she'll be accompanying you all on the trip.

ND looks more confused.

Quinn: But, she coached our rival glee club.

Shelby: Yea, but, don't worry, it's all in the past. We'll have a great time. Wait a minute, where's Puck and Finn.

Will: Shelby, they've been ditching glee club for a while now.

Shelby: Why

Will: You don't want to know. (To ND) I have to go, behave, and enjoy your trip.

Will leaves

Shelby: Guys, seriously, what's going on with Puck and Finn, why have they been out for a while.

Artie: It's nothing.

Santana: I'm sure you won't care.

Shelby: Why not?

Kurt: Let's just say that it involves something with VA back when you coached them.

Shelby: I highly doubt that they're ditching glee club because of something with VA two years ago. Enough with the games.

Rachel: How about we start with our rehearsal?

Shelby: OK, fine.

At the end of rehearsal, Santana looks sad.

Santana: Is there not a way to pesuade Karofsky to become openly gay.

Mercedes: Wait, Santana, I have an idea

Mercedes whispers in Santana's ear

Santana looks happy.

Song Spoiler:

The song all the glee clubs do at the park is Power of the Dream, and Tina will sing the lead vocals.

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I just re-read all of this. I didn't know Mercedes knew Karofsky was gay. i wonder hos Shelby will react to Figgins ban. I wonder if Tina's plot and Karofsky's are going to cross...

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Glad Shelby's back and hope Finn and Puck come back!!

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What happeened to Finn and Puck??????

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I know it makes for a good plot device but legally a principal cant do what Figgins is doing to Finn and Puck in your story. They can't be penalized in their senior year for something that happened sophomore year. Other than that, I have no other problem with your story. I hope things work out for them in the end.







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